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This is just. I don't even remember why I wrote this, to be honest. I think it was because I was overdosing with Ghost in the Shell, I think? Anyway, thoughts?
(I won't scrap this now)
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013
Amazing. My favorite line has got to be "Look at the starry rain and smile at the comet shower." but the line about Aiedail is a very close second. Simply amazing, and beautiful job as always Cassie.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much, Aiedee. <3
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2013
You're welcome. :aww:
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Adrolyn Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Ghost in the Shell: SAC rocks.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
:love:
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violetense Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
Excellent.
I especially like the implication that the adressed subject may not be quite human: that humanity is something that escapes even us.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, dear.
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah, I really like the image of shutters on a soul and I think that is a lovely line to start the whole piece with as it really sets up the tone nicely.

The spacing works so well here to create a sense of quiet and thoughtfulness like the words themselves, like the questions scattered between.

while I will not kill you messily with a spoon if you scrap this, I will be sad to see it go into hiding.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Student Writer
I love your comments so very much. Thank you kindly.

I just removed that. I do not wish to sadden anyone or be killed with a spoon(?).
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0hgravity Featured By Owner Feb 5, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
ah, I'm very glad to hear that. very welcome.

haha, thank you. so violent she is, haha. you two are a riot.
I thought it funny and fitting to see your submitted works side-by-side this morning in my inbox.
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