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I was once the moon-rippled, crystal clear
disturbance at shore
and you found hope, resting
on the borders of
sand and wave.
When I moved, you breathed,
It just isn't worth it,
and I
wish
I
had listened.

I was carved on ship hulls for a
reason,
and I was summoned from sleep to
drown myself in the clutches
of a sea that disowned me
for one too-
and I wrote on woody parchments
for more attention than
story-telling.
So when you moved, I stopped,
Tell me this is eternal,
And I
wish-
I really
wish
I had not.
This just came to me.
I'd love your thoughts on it.

I'm literally crying. You guys. Daily Deviation? My first?
Thank you so much, `OfOneSoul and ^thorns
You just. For someone as broken as me, you guys really did make my day. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
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Daily Deviation

Given 2013-02-10
Worn Out Siren Tales by ~your-methamphetamine ( Suggested by OfOneSoul and Featured by thorns )
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Writer
That is so beautiful, it is just so amazing how you bring these things alive.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much, love :heart:
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :huggle:
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Beautiful. :aww:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Writer
:love:
thank you!
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
You're welcome. :aww:
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lupus-astra Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It deserved a DD. 
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student Writer
i'm honored that you think so. :heart::heart:
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ssensory Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013   Writer
oh i feel determined now

this is oh such a wonderful poem and definitely more than worth the DD feature.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
for what? WHATEVER IT IS STAY DETERMINED, YOU AWESOME SOUL.

thank you so much, gosh. that means so much to me. :love:!
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ssensory Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013   Writer
you'll see soon. ;p 

you're so welcome, lovely! i'm glad it does. (i think this was the poem that made me want to watch you a while back) :hug:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
can. not. wait. :la:

:happycry: warms the heart!
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ssensory Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013   Writer
hopefully, you'll get to see soon. :la: 

:heart:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student Writer
you never got to it :(
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riparii Featured By Owner May 18, 2013
Featured: [link]
:heart:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner May 20, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, kindly. :heart:
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Ambiguous-Catharsis Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Hi! I just wanted to let you know that your amazing work has been featured here: [link]
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Apr 19, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you, thank you, thank you. :heart: :hug:
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013   Writer
Your wonderful work has been showcased here: [link]
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Mar 27, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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pomohippie7 Featured By Owner Mar 28, 2013   Writer
You're quite welcome. And thank YOU for the favorite. :)
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2013
Beautiful. I really must say I loved the "So when you moved, I stopped," all the way to the end. Perfect response to the answer of something you don't want to hear, and a lovely if tragic question. Amazing job.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much!
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Mar 6, 2013
You're welcome. :aww:
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ForgottonKeyblade Featured By Owner Feb 26, 2013  Student General Artist
This is beautiful! I love this! It's one of my favorites!
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
so sorry for the late response! thank you so much <3
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ForgottonKeyblade Featured By Owner Aug 9, 2013  Student General Artist
Don't be sorry! And you're welcome!
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violetense Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
i was carved on ship hulls for a reason.
Reminds me of the Sirens.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 16, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you so much. I love stories about Sirens.
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winterkate Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
Congratulations on the DD :) I thought you had left dA, for some reason. Glad to see you're active and successful as ever! This one was really gorgeous, the part about ship hulls very striking.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 15, 2013  Student Writer
I did, it was after I got the DD. Thank you so much. :)
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winterkate Featured By Owner Feb 18, 2013  Student Writer
You're really welcome! Don't leave on us, lol
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Lit-Twitter Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Chirp, congrats on the DD, it's been twittered. [link] :)
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Eeeee thank you!
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BloodArt Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
Once,as it seems,
again,as it sees,
over and over.

It,as it is,
it,as it was,
over and over.

One as the one,
two as no one,
over and over.

BloodArt(literature): Participation Collection
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
:heart:
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
I still can't get over how amazing this is. I gave myself a few days from when you posted it, so maybe I could post some coherent thoughts about how amazing it is. Nope. None.

Amazing. :love:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Oh dear. :blush:

Thank you so much, love!
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travelgirlxx Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013
:heart:
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holygreatgrandparome Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Beautiful, absolutely inspiring.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
:happycry: Thank you so much. <3
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holygreatgrandparome Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Anytime :)
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UnspecifiedUnknown Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013   Writer
this is hearwrenchingly beautiful, congrats on the so well-deserved dd m'love :iconflyingheartsplz:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you. :heart:
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Mitsukismirror Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Wow! I normally don't look at literature pieces on DA but I was looking at The DD's and your poetry came up. I love this!! It made me feel the emotions of her so well. :D Thanks for such a lovely work even though its not an image it is a beautiful piece of art! :heart:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
I am touched. Thank you so much. :heart:
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Mitsukismirror Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
no problem!! I might check out more literature here on DA just because of your beautiful poem. :heart:
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archelyxs Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013
This is really beautiful! Congrats on the DD :heart:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Student Writer
Thank you!
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silenced-echo Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Congrats on the well-deserved DD! This is utterly wonderful!
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