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I was once the moon-rippled, crystal clear
disturbance at shore
and you found hope, resting
on the borders of
sand and wave.
When I moved, you breathed,
It just isn't worth it,
and I
wish
I
had listened.

I was carved on ship hulls for a
reason,
and I was summoned from sleep to
drown myself in the clutches
of a sea that disowned me
for one too-
and I wrote on woody parchments
for more attention than
story-telling.
So when you moved, I stopped,
Tell me this is eternal,
And I
wish-
I really
wish
I had not.
This just came to me.
I'd love your thoughts on it.

I'm literally crying. You guys. Daily Deviation? My first?
Thank you so much, `OfOneSoul and ^thorns
You just. For someone as broken as me, you guys really did make my day. Thank you. Thank you. Thank you.
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Given 2013-02-10
Worn Out Siren Tales by ~your-methamphetamine ( Suggested by OfOneSoul and Featured by thorns )
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Writer
That is so beautiful, it is just so amazing how you bring these things alive.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Oct 13, 2013  Student Writer
thank you so much, love :heart:
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RoseScarlet Featured By Owner Oct 23, 2013  Student Writer
You're welcome :huggle:
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Sep 6, 2013
Beautiful. :aww:
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Sep 12, 2013  Student Writer
:love:
thank you!
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InTheStarryNightSky Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013
You're welcome. :aww:
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PrussianPersephone Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
It deserved a DD. 
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 23, 2013  Student Writer
i'm honored that you think so. :heart::heart:
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ivorysinkshore Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
oh i feel determined now

this is oh such a wonderful poem and definitely more than worth the DD feature.
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your-methamphetamine Featured By Owner Aug 8, 2013  Student Writer
for what? WHATEVER IT IS STAY DETERMINED, YOU AWESOME SOUL.

thank you so much, gosh. that means so much to me. :love:!
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